RoA: Round 1 Page 9

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Oh Rez, quit killing your brain cells. You need them.

I hope Kysar's saliva doesn't stain clothing. That would be kind of bad.

Panel four makes me lol
And idk about anyone else, but it looks like Rez has to poop in the third to last panel.
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I tried to actually take my time on the backgrounds, found a tutorial to make water look like water. As for everything else, I've looked over my script a hundred or so times to see if it makes sense and whatnot. I hope I didn't need to clarify but that fast streak of water of deadly doom is a part of the current spawn, kind like a... Unicorn 8D
She can't spawn two things at once, unless it's like, juggling lol. So improvision is key.
But my problem is I don't want to be explaining everything going on, rather have it clearly portrayed. Sooo I need some tips lol.


Kysar (C)

Critique is always appreciated!