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What rules?

Well, here goes...

At long last, blood, sweat, and tears, I bring you part one of my final round of CM! :faint:

Best part is I have 2 more parts to do....

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But in the end, it was worth it.

I dunno where to start... Ummm...

Well I guess firstly I hope I've got everybody as in character as possible, for one.

Two, I hope everything is making sense whether it be story, dialogue, or transition wise.

Last, I hope that ending wasn't too extreme or anything... Marty can't help he's gone off the deep end going all absolute power on everybody. But seriously, the idea had been in my head forever but hopefully it'll make more sense later on for what I've got planned because I actually found a way to make it somewhat important!

I guess now all I ask for is any constructive criticism to apply to the next and third parts. This is my first time trying one of these forms of media, so I'm bound to have messed up something. So critic away!

I hope you all enjoy and look forward to part 2 coming out next month! I hope I did not disappoint ;n;


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Flash comic made possible thanks to ~fluffyz

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Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Mart: Picture of Sanity, Slayer of Reality.
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
And major breaker of rules.
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AmiliaLongTail Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffffff, sack Linda and Harlie is so sexy. The interactions between Marty and Omer are great too XD
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
They're totes sexy. Thanks! XD
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh wow this is really cool like i'm freaking out a little?
MAN THE CANONS SHINK, THIS OPPONENT AINT GOING DOWN WITHOUT A FIGHT.


Anyway golly i REALLY like the way you draw saiph and lenny im crying because it's great
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D I'm glad you like it

COME AT ME BRO.

XD I'm happy I draw them to you and Shink's liking >:V
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i managed to sneak up into the computer and see part 2 and that one was also great and omg tension with the floatin and the blocks and hello you are perfect
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD Thank you pfff I am glad I didn't disappoint!
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
afhad excuse you it's beautiful. i can't wait for the next parts!
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SprayPaintHavoc Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
= D This is really epic, Lo! I love flash comics in OCTs. x)
Good luck with the next parts!
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much! :D
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^^" As flattered as I am I have to say that's a tad rude to say out in the open, and especially cause Filly's a close friend of mine. I doubt you meant it that way, but just a heads up is all!

But thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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Darkside-Rojas Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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im really sorry, that was a rude thing to say, i compared an annimation to a flash comic and i shouldnt have to begin with...
i was a lil short on time and i think i wrote the first thing to pop into mind and didn't realize to the full extent what it was >:I

in all, that really was not what i meant. so let me rephrase if you will.


ahem
Filly, you bout to have some major competion coming 'fore too long, and i can't wait to see yall in action together.

... you don't mind hiding the original comment do you?
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's alright, I figured you didn't mean it that way ^^' Will do~
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Darkside-Rojas Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i hope you know that i lost sleep over this >8I
not your fault though... you pointed out my mistake and i couldnt sleep cause i couldnt get online to correct myself
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TheBattyCrow Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this format, it makes it so much easier to visualize whats going on. Don't get me wrong, I loved your narrations before as well.
Really awesome^^ hehe Marty's expressions are epic win :XD: it's official: he's lost his mind... well, he may have before, but now it's official :lol:
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bahaha, ooh, Marty's lost it. Loved the whole "COME AT ME BRO!" part - aaaaawesome :D
I have a feeling that crazy!Marty is gonna kick in some FACE! :la:
Awesome job with the flash comic - love it!
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He really has lost his marbles hasn't he?

Thanks so much! :D
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It certainly looks that way! I mean, look how he treated poor sandbag!Harlie - for shame Marty, for shame XD

You're welcome! :D
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Alcalius Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhh that was so wonderful!!! Awesome job! :)
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Eeee thank you! :D
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Cloudbat Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aloooone 8'U

Scarecrow! <333333

Oh hi dar Avon. Keeping poor Saiph company. <3

Marty, pillows always lie. Don't trust those brohoes. >:U

COME AT ME BRO >C

Hey Death! Lookin'....lookin' good. All scraggly.

I love this btw~
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Alone... Alone...Alone...

Can't leave out lil Avon no we can't! >:C

They're full of evilness.

NO U.

Thanks! I'm glad you think so :D
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Cloudbat Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aloooooooone 8'C

D'awwww o////o

And flour. :iconfryplz:

NO DOUBLE U.

I do think so :iconlikeasirplz:
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Jeeeeeeeeeeeez Marty, why you throwing floursack!Harlie around? He only wanted to sit there and stare at your amazingness! >8C
The Linda's eyebrows are killing me pff

This turned out fabtastic 8D I love how the frames turned out. Really great art for each one. You seem to have a set style that's working for you.

And baaawwws all the emotions making me feel... emotions 8'U Dat Helena needs a hug. I'm sure Marty would love to give her one. Hugs of death that is.

I look forward to the next parts! :iconexciteddummyplz:
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Marty does not appreciate the silent treatment from his favorite floursack employees! >8C

Thanks! 8'D I was thankful I was able to find a fast working style in such a short time cause it really works out for me to get things colored quickly, even the lines are less a pain XD

Hugs of death are the best kind of hugs. I give them to people every day.

YOU BETTER.
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s-mores Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
I'm so confused.
I flipped through this entire thing because the art is great, then went to read it all, but this is the *only* thing I've read ._.

I have no idea what is going on.

Must start from round one now >_>
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Looks like you got some homework to do!
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StupidShepherd Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student
Maaaaaaaaaaaaaan things are getting intense now aaaaaaaw yeah >8C

Mart, you so crazy, gurl! Explodin dem Omers and abusin dem replacement Harlies and makin yer neck sensors go all curly like that >:1

I like how you set this round up as this flash comic thingy though, it really turned out nifty 8'U
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So intense I can't contain my vital organs >8C

He can't help he's lost brain cells and has been off his medication for almost a week 8C

Thanks dude I'm glad you think so 8'U
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StupidShepherd Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student
MAAAAN PUT DEM ORGANS BACK BRO GOSH >8C


maaaaaan he shoulda done gone back and got them before blowin up his world mhmm >:1


np bro 8'U
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so bloody awesome. I love Saiph's ranting at Omer and the Hylan talking to Helena and Marty's "BLARGH, I'M NOT AFRAID" and... well everything!

Pf, you're gonna win so hard, we have no chance.

Also the way you draw Saiph is totally awesome. Just FYI.
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Eeee, I'm glad you approve! :'D

You make me laugh 8D I am pretty confident you are gonna win twice as hard.

I love drawing his hair, so yay! 8D
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