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Well, here goes...
At long last, blood, sweat, and tears, I bring you part one of my final round of CM!
Best part is I have 2 more parts to do....
But in the end, it was worth it.
I dunno where to start... Ummm...
Well I guess firstly I hope I've got everybody as in character as possible, for one.
Two, I hope everything is making sense whether it be story, dialogue, or transition wise.
Last, I hope that ending wasn't too extreme or anything... Marty can't help he's gone off the deep end going all absolute power on everybody. But seriously, the idea had been in my head forever but hopefully it'll make more sense later on for what I've got planned because I actually found a way to make it somewhat important!
I guess now all I ask for is any constructive criticism to apply to the next and third parts. This is my first time trying one of these forms of media, so I'm bound to have messed up something. So critic away!
I hope you all enjoy and look forward to part 2 coming out next month! I hope I did not disappoint ;n;
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