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DO NOT READ BELOW UNTIL YOU FINISH READING ABOVE

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What rules?

Well, here goes...

At long last, blood, sweat, and tears, I bring you part one of my final round of CM! :faint:

Best part is I have 2 more parts to do....

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But in the end, it was worth it.

I dunno where to start... Ummm...

Well I guess firstly I hope I've got everybody as in character as possible, for one.

Two, I hope everything is making sense whether it be story, dialogue, or transition wise.

Last, I hope that ending wasn't too extreme or anything... Marty can't help he's gone off the deep end going all absolute power on everybody. But seriously, the idea had been in my head forever but hopefully it'll make more sense later on for what I've got planned because I actually found a way to make it somewhat important!

I guess now all I ask for is any constructive criticism to apply to the next and third parts. This is my first time trying one of these forms of media, so I'm bound to have messed up something. So critic away!

I hope you all enjoy and look forward to part 2 coming out next month! I hope I did not disappoint ;n;


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Flash comic made possible thanks to ~fluffyz

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Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Writer
Mart: Picture of Sanity, Slayer of Reality.
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
And major breaker of rules.
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AmiliaLongTail Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pffffff, sack Linda and Harlie is so sexy. The interactions between Marty and Omer are great too XD
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
They're totes sexy. Thanks! XD
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh wow this is really cool like i'm freaking out a little?
MAN THE CANONS SHINK, THIS OPPONENT AINT GOING DOWN WITHOUT A FIGHT.


Anyway golly i REALLY like the way you draw saiph and lenny im crying because it's great
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D I'm glad you like it

COME AT ME BRO.

XD I'm happy I draw them to you and Shink's liking >:V
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i managed to sneak up into the computer and see part 2 and that one was also great and omg tension with the floatin and the blocks and hello you are perfect
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NuclearLoop Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD Thank you pfff I am glad I didn't disappoint!
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CerbysaurusRex Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
afhad excuse you it's beautiful. i can't wait for the next parts!
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SprayPaintHavoc Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
= D This is really epic, Lo! I love flash comics in OCTs. x)
Good luck with the next parts!
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