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Archibald 1.26

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All aboard the nope-train. That is definitely not the other guard.

Damn Madrid, you must have a strong face to withstand that impact. Kudos, bro.

I actually finished this page like the beginning of last week but the lighting and shading became an issue again and I kept revisiting it but nothing worked. I think I need a new plan regarding backgrounds and characters, is it easier to make the backgrounds first anybody think? (probably yes I would think) Any tips or pointers would be greatly appreciated please and thanks :dummy:


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Oops, that definitely is not a friend. But hey, there's still time! Come on Mad, apologize and have a tea party! No? oh okay then. Frenemies works too. 8D

I'm liking the arrangements throughout the panels in this one. Despite that the view keeps going back and forth between being in front of Mad and behind her, you made it work so as everything turns it isn't jarring. I like Mad's positioning in the second panel too with how she's struggling to get up, and baddypants lady's feet is in the foreground all MMMHMM THIS FOOT JUST KICKED YOU >8C

And the goldeny lighting still looks pretty dang fabulous. It works well in the last panel with the glow from the building sorta building a "halo" effect.

I'm not exactly sure how to feel about the dialogue. I like the last batch of revelation regarding the traffic incident but I think the "Well, well" part just bothers me the most cause it sounds incredibly corny. Which I assume Mad is making fun of in the 4th panel but it kinda put a bad taste in my mouth if that makes sense. And her talking about "Dall" kinda bugs me too cause idk who the heck that is and I guess it's supposed to make me feel curious but I just get kinda annoyed cause it's another term/name I gotta keep up with. Unless they immediately start talking about that in the next page I'm not going to care enough to remember. If that makes any sense. :U