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I appreciate critique for this!
As seen livestreamed! 8D
Well, finally go around to doing a human character (aside from my rarely drawn persona)
I dared myself to make her with butch hair, idk if I even did it right or not. But I like how this turned out.
I dunno what to include her in yet, but I'll find something
Any extra info I feel like adding:
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(c)~NuclearLoop
As seen livestreamed! 8D
Well, finally go around to doing a human character (aside from my rarely drawn persona)
I dared myself to make her with butch hair, idk if I even did it right or not. But I like how this turned out.
I dunno what to include her in yet, but I'll find something
Any extra info I feel like adding:
N/A
(c)~NuclearLoop
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You said you want a critique, so brace yourself, cuz I'm known for being brutally honest XD I'm only commenting on anatomy here.
The first few seconds I saw this, I thought it was a guy, but then I saw the chest, and I was like, "Oh." There are two main reasons for this. One, because she's not wearing very girly clothes, but that's not a problem at all. Really, who cares? It's part of the character. Two, because she has a very manly body. I'm not saying she needs to be pencil thin with giant breasts and a huge ass, I just mean she's got the build of a man--especially her legs. Really, they're pretty disproportionate to the rest of her body. This, along with that little head and the teeny-weeny neck, looks almost silly. Her ankle (well, the part just above her sock, anyway) is time-and-a-half as big as her neck, when it should be the other way around.
Okay, end of brutal honesty :3
P.S. I like her hair and the coat.
The first few seconds I saw this, I thought it was a guy, but then I saw the chest, and I was like, "Oh." There are two main reasons for this. One, because she's not wearing very girly clothes, but that's not a problem at all. Really, who cares? It's part of the character. Two, because she has a very manly body. I'm not saying she needs to be pencil thin with giant breasts and a huge ass, I just mean she's got the build of a man--especially her legs. Really, they're pretty disproportionate to the rest of her body. This, along with that little head and the teeny-weeny neck, looks almost silly. Her ankle (well, the part just above her sock, anyway) is time-and-a-half as big as her neck, when it should be the other way around.
Okay, end of brutal honesty :3
P.S. I like her hair and the coat.